@Radha Rani You have been doing an amazing job summarising your book. A few language points to review: When we list things in English a good tip is to list three things using parallel structure. You wrote: "He also said that allowing the fear and desire to control their lives, never exploring their dreams, working hard for money and thinking that buying things with this money would make them happy, and thinking that a job makes someone secure is also cruel, and it is a trap." You could break this into two clear parts: He also said that allowing the fear and desire to control their lives, working hard for money and thinking that buying things would make them happy. In addition, he said thinking that a job makes someone secure is also cruel. I also think you meant to say "ruin" your lives, not "run". Remember that a summary doesn't have to have all of the details. Try and focus on a few main points. You shared a lot for only two pages of reading! Sometimes choosing the most important points can be a challenge. Keep up the great work!