Who's got a winning email outreach example? - Please share your screenshots. These are what I have so far

Hey guys, I'm Praba, i am fairly educated about growth operating from both organic and paid side. Still stuck at phase 1 (outreach grind for first client). Came here to be around people that are growing and to be mentored by Archie and Loic. Gonna get out of trenches before Q4 ends 🔥🦾

Hi everyone, my name is Serah and I'm from Ireland. I recently joined the ScaleWise Media community and I'm working on landing my first client. I've had my first pitch and I'm in the rev share negotiation stage. I'm hoping to use this opportunity as my stepping stone to financial freedom and would love to connect with others in this group as I grow! I'm @serahdemi on Instagram if you'd like to connect there. Looking forward to meeting you all!