Hi @Nabeel Azeez and everyone, i fix the format. Here is my work on juicy bullets: Copy Translation of the Juicy Bullets i find inside the ecom brand page. Page: https://www.eightsleep.com Juicy Bullet 1 For the life you live, From intense workouts to slow days, pregnancy to menopause, the Pod adjusts to promote deep sleep. My Analysis: Element: Useful, because the word “promote deep sleep” shows the benefit and the desire of the customer to improve sleep. Element: Understandable too, the word is not too complicated. My Rewrite: Juicy Bullet: For the life you live, From intense workouts to slow days, pregnancy to menopause, the Pod adjusts to promote deep sleep in a NEW way. What I Rewrite: Element i add: New, be slight state the word “NEW” Juicy Bullet 2 Quit fighting over the thermostat, Cool or heat your side just how you like it, from 55°F to 110°F. What happens on their side has zero impact on yours. My Analysis: Element: Useful, because it solves the sleep couple problems too. Element: Understandable, the word is easy to understand Element: Slightly Ultra-Specific, point out the number from 55 F to 110 F My Rewrite: Juicy Bullet: Stop arguing about the temperature of the room, Cool or heat your side whatever you want, from 55°F to 110°F. Zero Impact on sleeping partner. What I Rewrite: I just add word and fix some phrase, I don’t actually add any element Juicy Bullet 3 Intense workout? The Pod boosts your recovery. Through fitness app integration and tags, the Pod clocks it and can automatically run cooler to support recovery while you sleep. My Analysis: Element: Useful, solving the recovery problem after intense workout Element: Big, Fast Recovery while you sleep Element: Slightly Easy, “Through fitness app integration and tags, the Pod clocks it and can automatically run cooler”, it automatically does it without your effort to run cooler. Element: Understandable My Rewrite:

Hi @Nabeel Azeez and everyone, i have just learnt the lesson about Juicy Bullets. I find Juciy Bullets from this Ecom Brand Page, analyse it and rewrite. Here is my work: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OUpDWyxxPQ05Kz-V2SsPNZuXKKyO9Sw83UM2xBgQepE/edit?usp=sharing I want to ask these questions: Am i knowing and colleting correct juicy bullets from the page? How about my copy translation process, this is my first attempt, What mistakes do i have with my Copy Translation process on these bullets? I also rewrite bullets. Am i making it better or making it worse. What are my mistakes on rewriting these bullets? How can i improve it way better? Share your honest thoughts on my work. Thank you so much I love the feedback, even the brutal one.

Hi @Nabeel Azeez and everyone. I have just learnt the lesson inside the copywriter starter kit I read 10 reviews from the ecom brand named Eight Sleep and Create the Ideal Customer Avatar. Here it is: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NHTMbxdqSAelil4vJTzJnv9tCDKzyjSizfw1pUIJZeQ/edit?usp=sharing I want a feedback on what is my problem, what am i missing. What should i do to improve my research next time. Welcome everyone to share a perspective. Thank you so much

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