OK thank you. It's better now but can still be improved. I will make some edits shortly.

@Steven Le OK I fixed the formatting and the content. It all fits on one page now. You can see my process here: https://share.descript.com/view/HywzpFKfevG You still have to: 1. Add one or two sentences of personal info to your profile. I've left some extra space for that. 2. Buy a domain name and Google Workspace to set up a business email address. If you cannot do this, then create a new free gmail for your business that looks professional. I've given you examples in the video. 3. Set up your LinkedIn profile and add the link to your CV.

Good work. No notes. Reads like an old school magalog. I think we should all have one long-form version like this.

@Steven Le OK try to fix what I said fast and then let me know. I'll take a look again.

@Steven Le Just the written stuff. The headshot you can fix as soon as you can.

Honestly I think this is better than mine. But that's just my buying style. I like when the pitch is clear and direct. And even without any design, it looks “designed”, which is good.

I wanted to use these videos but after watching them I think we can do a lot better. So the reason I gave you this vertical video with the shot framed that way–lots of space above my head–is because I thought you were going to make it green screen and add stuff in the background. And if you were going to use the clip as-is, you could add clips, graphics, screenshots and other stuff above my head. The captions are also meant to be just above my head, center frame. Right now they are in the “dead zone” on the phone where the UI will cover the captions. It's also why I asked you if you want a landscape version, so you have more freedom with how you frame the shot in a vertical video. And you'd have the option of making a landscape video as a variation. Also, you haven't mixed the audio, so the sound quality is poor. Which tool did you use to edit the video and add captions?