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The wrong way...here's the rewrite
First, check out the cold e-mail I was sent...
No subject line, vague "atta' boy" and just a straight pitch and asking if I want a price sheet.
I don't even understand half of the shit she said.
-made assumptions and dumb stuff about my audience and commenters
-just listed off services
Just reallly bad.
Don't do this...
Rewrite for a better shot:
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Subject: I love your videos
Hello,
I love your videos, I've been following your channel for a while now and my favorite one is how you broke down the customer awareness journey.
My name is Chloe.
We'd love to pay you to promote our content to your audience. We've been in business X years & helped X amount of experienced machine learning practitioners get Y result.
Your audience is safe with us.
Would you like to know how much we'd pay you based on your metrics?
Just reply "yes" and I'll send a pricing sheet right over!
Sign off,
Stranger from the internet
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The wrong way...here's the rewrite
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