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Very Urgent need Advice

Hey guys, need real advice.

Sent a cold email yesterday to a coach in Singapore. Rewrote her homepage hero inside the email as the free value. She just replied: "thanks for the feedback, who are you, is there a way to look at your profile?"

Here's my problem. I don't have a profile. No portfolio site, no big following, and few case studies. I've been learning copy by writing for real prospects, not by building an audience.

I've got a PDF ready with five more rewrites of her homepage. My instinct is to send it and say something like "I don't have a profile, but I have more of what you already replied to." Bet on the work, not the credentials.

Anyone been in this exact spot? Would you play the honesty card, or is there a smarter angle I'm missing?

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Very Urgent need Advice