Hi Nabeel and friends, Could you please review and critique my email? Thank you https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SxlrCg3BSH9-MRLNmd9yKyYoZoPj5e566SXFeM11poU/edit?usp=sharing

Hi Nabeel and Friends, Is it okay to write a fiction story for our story based copy? Thank you.

While I am monkeying with a current offer to see if it will works while spending money on FB ads, I decided to work on a new one in a mean time. I figured to started how @Nabeel Azeez told me, rather than offer dumb and raise everyone's blood pressure and lower eye sight, do it with ULTRA small steps. So here is step 1, 1.3 pager of concept. Biggest thing is 3 paragraths in the end - what is the result women will get? I want to avoid "dump him, he is not the boyfriend material", BUT based on how the results of the product are worded "he will never commit to you fully" might as well be "dumb him". Same same https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MojPmR0PD7VudR85FzXS615asbvD6FQlzCZ2jIPZs4k/edit?tab=t.0

Got a new exploratory call with someone this week. Normally I am relatively confident, but my head's all over the place lately. (Wife is on bed rest - last month pregnant; + we have a energetic toddler running around + I'm trying to kickstart my career 😅). Hopefully I won't black out. Wish me luck!